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Looking Good!
I think version 2 is a great improvement and takes the comments received on v1 into account in a positive way. It now has some really helpful advice on brushing and flossing, which is concise and to the point.
Have the advice and language improved in the new version of the leaflet? Can we improve further?
Only a couple of comments on v2:
Should the heading better be: "What is Gum / Periodontal disease" (there is a missing space around the backslash too).
Should there be a sentence on how to seek dental help in Scotland if you don't currently have a dentist?
Do you find the images added helpful? Can we improve them?
Yes, they look much better. The new photo is far more natural looking.
Would you suggest other formats to present self-care information to patients? (i.e. a video, infographic)
I think a video showing someone brushing their teeth in the correct fashion would be of use, as this is more engaging than some photos and text.
Thank you Gavin for the feedback, and suggestions for improvement. We will edit the leaflet accordingly!
Beatriz
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